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Hi there, my name is Muzammil and I am a student in Learning Hub 3 at Gisborne Intermediate School. I really like how you included many facts about Palmerston North as well as the entertainment options. It made me think of how I have wanted to live in this great city and all the great things about it. Have you thought about maybe including some more facts and finishing the piece because it ends at “but” . If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://gisintmuzammilk.blogspot.co.nz.
Hi there, my name is Jett and I am a student in Hub Mako at Gisborne intermediate School. I really like like how you made it very clear to read the writing . It made me think of a report on Palmerston North I read recently. Have you thought about making sure you have a full stop on the end of your sentence.. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is.https://gisintjettw.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Muzammil and I am a student in Learning Hub 3 at Gisborne Intermediate School. I really like how you included many facts about Palmerston North as well as the entertainment options. It made me think of how I have wanted to live in this great city and all the great things about it. Have you thought about maybe including some more facts and finishing the piece because it ends at “but” . If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://gisintmuzammilk.blogspot.co.nz.
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