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Showing posts with label persuasive. Show all posts
Showing posts with label persuasive. Show all posts

Friday, 4 December 2015

ALIENS!




I need help! I landed in a diffrent
planet  named Mars and I will need serious 
help! 

 I had been kidnapped by
 Marsians in Mars and their king talked to me in a dark room how life was in planet Earth!

I  lied and I said life on it was really horrible! It has poison air and very bad fruit. I had to lie so the Marsian King and his army
would't attack Earth.

I said more things like the surface of Earth looks like it is blue and green and white, but really it is fire and lava with rock for a surface. 

The water was lava and there was no animals living there. 



Finally they let me leave. Now I need to contact back to Earth. I want to leave Mars!

L.I how to persuade someone

Friday, 21 August 2015

Living on the Moon!!


I think people should live on the Moon 
because they can find minerals.


Sometimes
they should live on the Moon because they can travel around the Moon and look for  fossils.

They need to live on the Moon so they can observe what happened to the Moon and to see if new things are in it.

They should live on the Moon so they can find out if meteors made different craters.
They should be living on the Moon so they can use a special telescope to see the weather on planet Earth.

I think people should live on the Moon to make it a tourist attraction, If it is safe enough they can make it into a space base.

L.I. WALT write a persuasive writing.

Monday, 17 August 2015

Children need Homework!

Children should be given homework because it can keep them busy working. 
  They can do their homework but they have to make sure that they won't destroy it, or else their teacher will get mad.
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Homework is good because it can teach things like Literacy and Science that involved spelling new words, and we can make ice cream, butter and make lots of strange things.

Some kids don't like to have homework because they will be angry if it takes long to finish and they want to play their games. 
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Adults should help their children with their homework so they can finish it on time for school.

I think children should do their homework because it is a lot of fun and challenging.

Tuesday, 11 August 2015

Why are we not allowed Ice Cream?

I like Ice cream. It is really delicious. 

Ice cream is not allowed to be eaten when it is frozen because it can damage your teeth.


It should not be eaten because it can be unhealthy, depending on what flavour you eat.

Ice cream is good to eat if it doesn't melt, If it melts then it can spill all over the floor unless if you can put all the melted ice cream inside a cup to drink. 

I think kids should not be allowed to eat ice cream because it can give you brainfreeze. You can tell if you have brainfreeze when your head starts hurting and when it feels cold.
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I think ice cream should be given as a treat but not every day when you eat it.

Thursday, 6 August 2015

How can Friends be Better!

I think friends would be better if they will never swear at you. 

I want friends to stop leaving their other friends behind, because the other one will be left alone with nobody to play with.

A friend would be nice if they will never throw their pencils at each other in the classroom because the pencils might hit and hurt them if they are pointy.

I think the most important things a friend can do is that they will play games together and make sure the games are not too rough, so nobody can get hurt.